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Songs have lyrics thats just crap

I see you've done alot of work on rhythm, but I think you've left out harmony and melody to a great extent. I can recall for the first minute or so you were stuck on one chord with the only dynamic part the rhythm line. It is good in that it has the traits of New Age techno music, very post modernist and minimalistic feel, and your music motifs aren't bad either. I just think you need to develop more on your harmony and blend it in to your melody line. Try to define your structure a bit better, but then again, if this is your style then it's unique. Good work, keep it up. +1

actually i was just toolin around on my apple "garage band"....it really doesnt bother me if you hate it or love it....you are all entitled to an opinion....its just something for fun....lets not get too uptight and serious about this now....lol....thanks for the bashing though....

yea, the ending is alittle abrupt but....whatever, i was just playin around...seeing what could be thrown together....

I personally think it's not bad.  But one thing you have to keep in mind is that percussion (in any type of music including techno) is there to emphasize the melody/harmony.  The goal should not to be to get as many different types of drum sounds/beats as possible but to follow the flow of the song.  There were several times where I was expecting a nice strong drum riff and there was nothing, and other times where the drums were over powering and didn't match the current feeling of the song.

I like the sound in general, but if your audience expects it one way and it's totally opposite it just makes it sound wrong...not bad...just not right.  And about it sounding repetative...that's exactly what's gettin' play in clubs...especially raves.  Anyway, keep it up...you gotta start somewhere.  Don't let these other guys get to you, just take it as constructive criticism.  My guess is none of them could do anything half as good.

Not trying to insult anyone, just saying don't take it to personally.