Ryan
Member
+1,230|7064|Alberta, Canada

Still a work in progress, and I'll be adding a lot more to it. I would just like to know what you guys think should be added, or any other type of comments really. Actual size if something like 1200x1700, but this is just a resized version.

https://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b386/derish14/spacescapewip.png
Surgeons
U shud proabbly f off u fat prik
+3,097|6710|Gogledd Cymru

I'd say it needs a dose of longcat to make it better.

Good job so far though. 
Ryan
Member
+1,230|7064|Alberta, Canada

I want specific comments and criticism OmniDeath, if I put it in there, people will skip over it and I won't be able to receive any feedback.
Catbox
forgiveness
+505|6937
looks pretty cool... the planet looks a little big though... don't know why...
and don't worry about pointless crits... some people can't stand when the spotlight isn't on them... 
Love is the answer
TheEternalPessimist
Wibble
+412|6841|Mhz

Smaller planet, add a moon - Win.

EDIT: Oh and try some reflections of the planet+moon in the water too, I'm not sure they'll look right given the height of them in the image but give it a try.

EDIT EDIT: You could extend the image downwards and do under the water too, or add some stuff to the space area, a comet or summin cheesy like that maybe?

Last edited by TheEternalPessimist (2008-08-13 13:29:34)

Ryan
Member
+1,230|7064|Alberta, Canada

I've actually changed it quite a bit, I'll post a new picture later.

TheEternalPessimist wrote:

EDIT: Oh and try some reflections of the planet+moon in the water too, I'm not sure they'll look right given the height of them in the image but give it a try.
That wouldn't be right because the planet isn't right above the water. It's thousands of miles away.

Last edited by Ryan (2008-08-13 13:35:48)

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