I was really liking the intro, even though I'm sure you didn't make the whole planet-zoom thing yourself. What really dissapointed me because of that was the simple pictures of maps flashing by. What's the point?
The Music was very good initially, I especially liked the bit of the intro mixed into it. I didn't like the second song much, though (nor the transition between the 1st and second)
Shinanigans for not using the usual lame editing effects. Better to have simple and nice than over the top and crap.
I was also hoping for a better outro, to be honest.
Now, as for the fighting in the movie, I must admit I wasn't really impressed. The latest trend might be to make movies of 'normal' kills, instead of your best, but what's the point in showing off something that isn't impressive? Especially the 1on1 fight. It was a missle kill on an F18, and a lucky one at that. Not to mention it was won mainly because you two went out of bounds, forcing him to die or take a chance.
Lastly, your technique itself. Use fly-by from the moment your opponent goes out of your cockpit view. You do not use fly-by once you've completely lost your opponent, you use it the moment you start losing them from your view. Any true 'pro' pilot would be able to wipe the floor with you with a simple few tricks just because you don't use fly-by properly.
to sum it up:
+editing
+intro, but the bit with the images of maps.. no
+music.
-content
-lack of outro