CruZ4dR
Cereal Killer
+145|6884|The View From The Afternoon
Hey there.

I've been wanting to make my own fragmovie. Now with a better graphics card, I collected and put together some clips yesterday. Fraps can be a bitch ingame, but still pulled of some decent shots. Please watch:



Luvvin the music
avman633
Member
+116|6592
It seemed good but I cant go past 4:55
CruZ4dR
Cereal Killer
+145|6884|The View From The Afternoon

avman633 wrote:

It seemed good but I cant go past 4:55
Thx. Maybe it works if you go to the direct link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qS0_yXCYnA0
Todd_Angelo
Leukocyte
+336|6855|Warlord
Okay, comments on the action first, then the vid itself.

I'd expect a lot more decent ownage shooting than the video shows; I'm sure you're capable of it judging from your stats and how I've seen you do in-game, but you're not showing it. There are some good shots in this but some of it is what you'd expect any half-decent player to be able to do with the sniper rifle, not Norway's #1 sniper foo It looks like you were recording one sitting and used everything you had!

And it looks thrown together; your editing needs a lot of work. Take the intro portion, you chopper in, bail and parachute, get into a sniper position, the viewer is surprised when you pull out the L96A1 (instead of the M95 which you might expect for someone about to camp the carrier) then you take aim aaaaand...... it cuts to the next scene without you firing a shot. WTF? If you make the audience wait you have to have a payoff scene for it to feel worth it.

I hate the music but I don't expect to like music in gameplay vids most of the time so that's no biggie as far as I'm concerned

Overall: 3/10.
CruZ4dR
Cereal Killer
+145|6884|The View From The Afternoon

Todd_Angelo wrote:

Okay, comments on the action first, then the vid itself.

I'd expect a lot more decent ownage shooting than the video shows; I'm sure you're capable of it judging from your stats and how I've seen you do in-game, but you're not showing it. There are some good shots in this but some of it is what you'd expect any half-decent player to be able to do with the sniper rifle, not Norway's #1 sniper foo It looks like you were recording one sitting and used everything you had!

And it looks thrown together; your editing needs a lot of work. Take the intro portion, you chopper in, bail and parachute, get into a sniper position, the viewer is surprised when you pull out the L96A1 (instead of the M95 which you might expect for someone about to camp the carrier) then you take aim aaaaand...... it cuts to the next scene without you firing a shot. WTF? If you make the audience wait you have to have a payoff scene for it to feel worth it.

I hate the music but I don't expect to like music in gameplay vids most of the time so that's no biggie as far as I'm concerned

Overall: 3/10.
Haha you're absolutely right. I agree with it, but my problem is that I have too much lag when recording, but next time I'll lower the settings first. As for the first carrier scene, I missed the headshot and the whore ran away And I couldn't recore more that round because of my low FPS when recording. As for the editing, I'm a noob. I've got some experimenting to do with my Vegas editing program, and will try to improve. Thanks for the constructive critisism.
Fearmesnipers
Member
+41|6674|Wales
looked like u were playing single player with all those people just standing still
CruZ4dR
Cereal Killer
+145|6884|The View From The Afternoon

Fearmesnipers wrote:

looked like u were playing single player with all those people just standing still
Well I wasn't. But I'm not gonna deny that some were fairly noobish. Most were just whores without veichles. They're like snails outside their shells- helpless and weak. Easy pickings.
[[AS]]TheWind
Member
+0|6493
It's not a pro Video, just not pro.

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